lost

lost i am not knowing when to turn when i need to make a choice.

 

not knowing what to do when something not predicted happens.

 

and not only me but i have lost my heart too

 

through the thick trees in a wide and large forest you can find my heart.

 

find it and give it back to me but with one condition please dont break it.  

Reviews

[Faraway Sado]

We are so willing to trust people with the most amazing gifted to us by God, our hearts. We feel for one moment in our life the true and pure feeling of belonging to someone and we feel wonderful. But before we know it the other person is returning our heart back to us... Broken. I loved your writing. It opened many doors of my heart and took me someplace else.

[Tate Morgan]

Its ok bu ti needs refinement

[nicolo]

too short. xD

The best way to find something is to lose it first, find it, and have it found. :)

[stars are far]

this is nice ...

[Libby]

Sad but touching c:

[Devilish_Light]

The heart is the life force it holds our hope our dreams our memories to break that is to lose your sight your way lose what was so precious to you love is a very difficult thing to understand and even more difficult to let go and take part in it. this is what the poem speaks to me. Good job :)

[STAR CHILD]

Oh such saddness in this one

[Kenneth The Poet]

Sweet. I love this.

It's heartbreaking with a few brush strokes, not too many.

Nice work, Brenda.

[The Analog Kid]

Once our heart is broken, we become more weary. We make it harder to get to our heart because we fear another heartbreak. Nice short and sweet.

[Starry Eyed]

So sweet.. I lvoe this Brenda!