A Child to A Teacher

Unbearable pain

Unbearable fears
Unbarable silence
Unbarable tears
> >

No one to love her
No one to care
No one oto help her
She couldn't share
> >
The world seemed against her
She couldn't fight back
The smallest mistake
Earned her a smack
> >
As you walk by her desk,
Her math paper blank,
Your words were so harsh
Her heart just sank
> >
The bell rang to go
But she stayed in her seat
Why go to lunch
When she couldn't eat
> >
He told her he'd kill her
if she dared to come back
She prayed that you would,
but you cut her no slack.
> >
The story came out
With tears in her eyes
But her mother had said
She made up such lies
> >
She asked for your help
What else could she do?
The world seemed to hate her 

So she hated it too.

Reviews

[eccath]

This is similar to your story (5th grade) if not exactly the same. Nice ryhme scheme!

[Emily Paige]

I really really enjoyed this

[Not A Writer]

Pretty depress ing but hey it's the fact of life at some times: the world if rough. You show the girl's life in many dimensions. I like how you add to her being upset it just adds water to the bucket creating sympathy and apathy for the girl. Have you been in a situation like this? It seems like you can relate. Nice write and it was a good read. Hope to read more when you publish more writings.