I am

Who am I?

I am the girl in the halls

Who you only see in the rain.

I am in the walls

of your smart a*s brain.

I am in your nightmares

I am the one to haunt your dreams

But when you scream no one cares.

When you see me all you can do is scream.

I am a girl

I am not a toy

I am a human

You cannot destroy

I will live on

No looking back

All my dreams gone

Because of that attack

Reviews

[SilentDreamer]

Interesting poem, strong ending and it flows well. Somewhat brutally honest. Nicely done.

[Matthew Kult]

an interesting look into who you are. Flowed well, very open with a slight look into something that seems personal. But leaves a slight curiousity for wanting to know more.

Matthew

[Pumpkinspice]

Very, very well written. Good luck in my contest! Pumpkin:)

[Dearantlers]

That's kinda creepy, but very well written. Though it sends shivers down my spines, it's really beautiful. Well done!!