I Swear I'll Be Fine
A Poem by
Lucy
I swear I'll be fine Oh mommy Please believe me You know I'd Never Lie.
I swear
I'll be fine
Oh mommy
Please believe me
You know I'd
Never Lie.
I swear
I'll be fine
I just need to
Vent my life
Share my story
So that you'll know
I swear
I'll be fine
Oh daddy
Can't you see
That all I need
Is a little love
I swear
I'll be fine
As soon as
This monster
Leaves
My soul
I swear
I'll be fine
I just need
To be shown
It's okay
To want to be me
© 2011 Lucy
Reviews
Touching and real.
Posted 13 Years Ago
very emotional, both on the writer's part and the readers'
Posted 14 Years Ago
very emotional, both on the writer's part and the readers'
Very nice. I like it! Stunning and beautiful. Well written.
Posted 14 Years Ago
Very nice. I like it! Stunning and beautiful. Well written.
This is a terriffic poem! Keep on writing! I love that ending by the way! Never stop writing and good job!
Posted 14 Years Ago
This is a terriffic poem! Keep on writing! I love that ending by the way! Never stop writing and good job!
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Added on June 20, 2011
Last Updated on June 20, 2011
Author
Lucy Milton, NH
About
Hi I'm Lucy. I'm 17 years old. I love to write. I mainly right poetry. Sometimes my poetry doesn't sound like the typical poet's. My poetry is based off of my life and my emotions. Not just random thi..
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