Oh Endless Love

Written by Louis Saint Verges

Oh endless love, white little grains

Why do you cause so many pains?

Why do you kill the people I love?

Where do you come from?

Not from above

You destroy families, friends and homes

then you leave the person all on their own

When we didn't know you,

we didn't give a damn

but now that we do

we finally understand

Its time for your seduction

to come to an end

we're taking back

what you've stolen

our families and friends

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

I like how you left this one open for interpretation.. It hints at this endless love seducing at tearing apart the family and friends but doesn't reveal what it is... I love the resilience exhibited in the piece.. It speaks of a heart that no longer accepts the abuse and is willing to fight back for those things precious to it.. It shows the need to search for those answers... to understand... to survive... and to find happiness again... as always you touch me with your words.. nice job..

[Luissanto]

Thank you for your kind and inspirational words...

[AprilRN1210]

You're welcome sir.. As always, it was my pleasure.. :)

[Duaa]

i love the rawnwss of feeling the strength of the emotion you captured by ur pen..love it! it is always a pleasure to read ur compositions

[Luissanto]

Thank You, Your words always bring me illumination and inspiration.

[Rene Salinas]

Oh nice at last I can copy paste a section from the bible given the context . After reading I relate to the musicality of the poem as it goes forward until the end and is easy and coherent. What I struggle with is that I would have said "What some call love". 1 Corinthians 13:4-8 Love is patient, love is kind. It does not envy, it does not boast, it is not proud. It does not dishonor others, it is not self-seeking, it is not easily angered, it keeps no record of wrongs. Love does not delight in evil but rejoices with the truth. It always protects, always trusts, always hopes, always perseveres.

But this one doesn't get anyone killed.

Thankyou Luis

[Luissanto]

Thank You for sharing...

[loverofpoetry7]

Intense and powerful...gripping. You have touched on a strong emotion and you have done it well. You captured a lot of feelings here. Great writing.

[Luissanto]

Thank You for your insightful words...

[Wynter Page]

This is amazing, and so powerful! I love this! The whole poem is just amazing, with a smooth flow!

[Luissanto]

Thank you for sharing... Your words inspire me.

[Wynter Page]

You're welcome, and thank you