I Miss...

Written by Louis Saint Verges

I miss our conversations

and the way we use to talk

I miss your hand in mine

when we use to walk

I miss looking into your eyes

as your lips touch mine

I miss holding you in my arms

and not thinking about the time

I miss the way you look at me

and the sweet words we used to tell

I miss your body's warmth

the way you feel, the way you smell

but most of all I miss

the way you stole my heart

and now that you're not here

its all fallen apart

Reviews

[Sophy Freebirds]

Wow.. i was filled with nostalgia.The way you wrote i could feel him by my side holding my hand but the final reality is that - he is absent.your words paint a kaleidoscope of memories- the moments shared will always be cherished.We remember someone the most because we try to forget them the most.. The pain will never go but the treasured memories will be a soothing balm to the jaded soul.I loved it. :)
~Sophy

[Luissanto]

Thank You for your kind and beautiful words... They are truly insightful.

[Sophy Freebirds]

You're welcome muchly.

[MagicAl]

Awe this is such a sad piece, but beautiful nonetheless.. love it! :)

[Luissanto]

Thank You for such beautiful words...

[Eve Ola]

added to my favourites. well done.
but most of all I miss
the way you stole my heart.. I am loving it

[Luissanto]

Thank You, your words are always such a blessing to me...

[Eve Ola]

my pleasure always :)

[Ivory]

A very strong piece. Sad but yet conveys true emotions that everyone has felt at one time or another.

[Luissanto]

Thank you, you are truly very kind...

[Luissanto]

Thank You, for all of you who have taken the time to review my work, and
share your hearts with me. I am both blessed and honored that you have chosen
to let me share my deepest innermost thoughts with you.
Thank You

[Matching Socks]

This is both a heart warming and sad poem.
Beautifully written, perfect flow.
Breathtaking ...

[Luissanto]

Thank You for your beautiful words... You are truly kind.

[Matching Socks]

You're not so bad either... :-)

[Girl With A Pen]

Beautifully written. An amazing rhyme scheme that rolls off the tongue. :) Good job

[Luissanto]

Thank You very much for your beautiful sentiments...