First Ever Story

seriously, the date on this notebook says May 2nd, 2006 I may have one before that, but it's missing a few pages. All spelling and grammar will be how it was written.

"Dave go to bed," said dad.
"I don't want to!" he responded.
Dad said "go to bed or your grounded for two weeks."
"NO!" Said Dave.
"YES!" Said dad.
"NO!" Said Dave.
"YES!" dad said
"I don't want to!" Dave said
"Yes or your grounded for two months!" said dad.
"FINE!" said Dave.

Author's Note

Isn't this the most engaging plot ever? I think the hidden meaning was that Dave really didn't want to go to bed, but dad made him, now I know that seems far fetched, but that's what I got from the story.
*Note the quotation marks I wrote were larger than parentheses, seriously.*
You really don't need to review this.

Reviews

[Persona]

Very short. The meaning wasn't hidden. If we don't need to review it, then why do you want us to read it? It looked like the most fascinating of all the read requests I've had sent my way today!

[Sophie]

It was meant to be a joke, this is literally the first thing I ever wrote. Sorry.

[Odayin]

This brings back memories...I remember my first story...haha.
Oh and btw, this always happened to me. Except my dad wouldn't say I was grounded he would just say "okay, fine, you don't have to go to bed" which scared me even more...

[.]

Strange and obvious it reminds me when I was 6 I didn't want to go to bed my dad said he would ground me for a year and that's when I went to bed. :D 100/100

[Harley (arbiter)]

Ah the good 'ole days of 5 years old :D at least that's what it reminded me of. Good for a first story

[A.C. Davis]

I hate it when my dad uses the grounded card >:(

[Amanda]

That was the most interesting thing I have ever read :P I love deeper meaning behind it all. Great work Sophie

[Amanda]

By the way, was this written in chicken scratch? :P

[Sophie]

actually, I think my handwriting may have been better then

[Amanda]

really? didnt you straighten it out last year? i cant really remember :)

[Sophie]

idek

[luv2dream]

Wow, clever plot . . .

makes me think of childhood . . .