Loved and Lost

haiku time!

And I thought I saw

shooting stars flash in your eyes,

but they were just lies.

Author's Note

reviews please!

Reviews

[Kimberly "Melody" Carne..]

How sweet and enticing are the lies yet untested. like music to the ears of the one ready to bite. Never is a lie discovered until the bitterness if found after the bite on the hook. You have done a great job of saying so much with so few words…well done as always Sophie;)

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simple but elegant. I loved this, although it was short, it spoke a thousand words. great job! :)

[Coyote Poetry]

A complete poem in 17 words. You are amazing. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

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Very creative :)

[Belinda]

Its like that first time you meet someone, and you think something is meant to be, when he looks at you that way, and you can't help but think that he only looks at you like that. And then its over, and you see him look at another girl the way he used to look at you. Lies with his eyes, Boys do it all the time. great read.

[Brittany DeFranco]

in just a few words, I saw emotion and meaning

[MandaBear]

very cool :)