Insignificant

A Poem by Sophie

was a haiku, but i added the last line

I feel like a tree

not ever lasting, nor tall

but sedentary.

And small.

© 2012 Sophie

Author's Note

reviews please!

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Odayin

The last line links the end with the beginning, smoothly written and you can definitely see there's something special about you from this one.
Great poem/haiku+1

Posted 13 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

justthatgirl34

Short and sweet. I love it.

Posted 13 Years Ago

Coyote Poetry

Sedentary. A very good word. A powerful poem. You said a lot in 14 words. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lydia

I love the last line. It almost makes it seem like an afterthought. Cool!

Posted 13 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on October 4, 2012
Last Updated on October 4, 2012

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Sophie

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I'm 16 in my sophomore year of high school, I started on this site when i was 14, took about a year break and now i might be back, im just fixing my description because i was annoying as f**k last yea.. more..