Pleasant

wrote these all in Algebra :P sorry for the flood

Warmth in your kisses,

soothingly cool fingertips,

but what if it's not pleasant?

What if there's fire on your lips?

Ice in your fingers,

and malice in your eyes,

the flames that burn me

are your wretched lies.

Your breath smells sweet,

but now I see its smoke,

to lull me to sleep

and wrap your fingers around my throat.

Your words are nooses,

leaving me hanging on those three words

my head lolls, my feet dangle, and my fingers have loosened,

and you've killed me for sure.

You are the Grim Reaper,

Death incarnate,

then why does the though of you

make my heart pleasantly ache?

Author's Note

reviews please!

Reviews

[Odayin]

This is wonderful!
The confusion and awareness is so obvious and you have such a dark twist. You aren't wearing your heart on your sleeve here: a pleasant kiss to fire on the lips and so many other features just dragged under. So many have felt this way and I'm sure your audience can relate...I know I can. You just untangled a knot of feelings so beautifully and managed to put it into words, quite nicely done.
At lead I'm not the only one who's had others
"make my heart pleasantly ache?"...great last line.
This was displayed wonderfully, excellent job

[Coyote Poetry]

"You are the Grim Reaper,
Death incarnate,'
Miss Sophie. You are a very good writer. I wish I had your skill for story. Nice flow of words and I like the use of the grim reaper. You must be a very good reader. You add a different subject to each of your writing. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Sophie]

Thank you so much!

[The Fallen]

Another good poem!

[Amanda]

i like this and it reminds me of something, but I can't remember what.
This is going to bug me all night.
All night.
Anyways good job haha :)