I Know

I don't know your name

I don't know your story

I don't know where you're from

I don't know where you're going

but I want to.

I don't know if you're hurt

I don't know if you've healed

I don't know who cut you

I don't know if the knife was iron or steel

but I want to.

I don't know your lover

I don't know if she exists

I don't know if you want one,

but I know I'm here if you wish.

Author's Note

not my best :/
reviews please!

Reviews

[Falling Leaf.]

Buongiorno,

I don't think that you should continue this. Don't get me wrong, it's very good, but lengthening it would make the repitition tiresome. What you have now--a concise piece with emotion stuffed into every line--is just fine. Why make the reader tire of the words that once created effect?

Arrivederci!

[AleyshaRosa]

I love the concept, the structure of the poem. I like how each question is almost rhetorical, though I'm not sure if that's the right word.
Thoroughly enjoyed, Sophie =]

Koodoos

[The Invisible Girl]

I like this very much! The second stanza is my favorite!! :) 100/100

[}Echo{]

I like this. Well written. Cool.

[Amanda]

I like it :) the second stanza was my fav