I Am Young

also in math

I would like to write
a poem
that encompasses the whole world
but I can't
because the world
is made of
too many things I don't know

Author's Note

reviews please!

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Your desire in the poem is the dream of many writers. I have read the masters of writing. Most lived a wild and crazy life. I believe most of them learn. We must do what we can with our given tools. We must save ourselves and tried to do some good in our world. A big world with many problems. I enjoyed the poem. Open the door to thoughts and question. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Dee’s Poem]

Hmmmph, deep , can only imagine a poet who knows it all.

[TurtleClark]

no matter how hard we want it we can never know all

[Mazie Tackett]

A novel wouldn't even be able to do that. This is different. I don't think I've read any poems like this yet. You have astonished be once again.

[Inda]

This is beauty and humbleness and youth in it's purest form. Great Piece!

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

Your desire in the poem is the dream of many writers.
I would like to do the same but don't know how I would to do eather.
good write tho.
100/100

[J. F. Charleston]

I see what you wish to do, but may I be blunt, I don't see the signifigance of the name of the piece it's classifying. It's good overall, but I didn't get the name part.

[MandaBear]

Very insightful. :) I really like this. Great Job