Shards #2

For another contest

 

Somehow

I loved you

You worthless

Spineless

Insignificant

Remnant

Of you

 

You used to be brave

In a subtle way

Now you are

Sharp

Rude

Painful

Shards

Of yourself

 

Pieces on the floor

Only a few hanging on

To the window pane

But soon, those will be gone

The clear

Piercing

Obvious

Sheer

Glass

Remnants of you

And even if put back together

You will never

Never

Be the same.

Author's Note

Not my favorite but its not my worst.

Reviews

[Time's The Bond]

mm...yeah not your best

[Brooklyn]

name suggestion: broken or what can't be fixed

[Plitman_728]

Brillaint. Absolutely brilliant. Very unique style. I'm in love with it. :)