Lies

Just a random idea...

These are letters

and these are words.

This is a sentence.

I am a girl.

Just as letters make up words

and words make up sentences

the world is made up of girls

and boys, just trying to keep up their pretenses.

A pretense that they are happy

that they are excited

when really inside, they feel smited.

These pretenses, are made of lies

and lies make a girl

So, if lies are girls

and girls are the world

then lies make up the world.

Author's Note

Thoughts? All honesty here!

Reviews

[Gastelum]

your foundations are great.
even if your suppositions are not correct i believe that in the realm and world of this piece everything you wrote seems sound and in no contest with what is truly correct of males and females in the world.
you should automatically assume that i will always feel your essence in your writing. your words have a way about them.
an eerie way about them.
hypnotizing usually.

thank you very much for sharing this piece.

[bethany cullen]

loved the fact it reads so easily and although complicated makes perfect sense xxx

[Tegon Maus]

Your writing is good... your reasoning is wrong. Lies are a conscious decision by the individual. If you are a liar you made the chooses necessary to become that No one but you can define you but you...

[Archia]

I adore the last stanza and what it means, so much. "then lies make up the world." Well, by what you say, maybe the do.
I love how you start with words and sentences, like an example almost, to then get to your point about lies and the world. It actually is something to think about.

[Adalynn]

Great write dear..

Adalynn