Forget This Time

thoughts?

Another heart broken

another one mangled

another memory spoiled

but maybe I'll forget this time

Maybe I'll move on

instead of dwelling

instead of crying

instead of remembering

maybe I'll forget this time

The rain likes to fall

at the most ironic times

the times when

I'm crying

because of your lying

but, hey, it won't last long

maybe I'll forget this time

Maybe the sun will shine

and take away the memory

of this day

take away the tears I spilled

maybe I'll forget this time

Maybe.

Author's Note

reviews please! I'll review your stuff! (Oh no, it's come to this... bribery D: lol)

Reviews

[Sophie]

Crap! I forgot to review all of you! Hold on!

[Priya]

I agree with Archia that it does flow like a song. Your words have a bittersweet quality to them. But I think that hope outweighs pain. Maybe we all have an inherent capacity to move on :)

[Archia]

I could imagine this as a song, it has that kind of repetitive beat to it. I quite liked this because of that, and because it really made it flow nicely.

[SuicidePact.]

aww yeah I agree it had a nice flow to it.

[jennifer little]

great job keep up the good work i loved it and thanks for sharing this with me

[Sylvana]

It was a good poem, and flowed nicely. Uhh... yes. My review. Voilà!