River

River

A Poem by Sophie
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wrote this in 6th grade.

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The waves crash
torrents swirl
icicles drip
icy fingers curl

the cold water holds
pushing down
never again
will I see the sun of gold

currents wind
rain whips
the storm thrashes
the cold water grips

© 2012 Sophie


Author's Note

Sophie
eh.
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I think its just fine. very good for writing in 6th grade

Posted 13 Years Ago

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