Story line (so far, or at least what I can show you :P)

story line for a new book?

Basic Plot

• Alternate universe where Columbus died before/ on his journey to what we know as America.- Story of 17 year old girl named Rose Amers who lives in 2012, in Country # 172 (America)

• Names of people are different, not much creativity. Sort of Boring. (Why did I capitalize that?)

• The Emperor- lives in a secret area of Country #172, no one allowed there. No one knows real name, not even his family (well, his parents do, but...) He is the 15^th descendant of the first Emperor, Theodore Vincere

• Theodore Vincere's character- (the past, 1500's) Evil, wants to take over the world. Succeeds. He becomes the first Emperor of Earth. Started by being Kin of England? Italy? Spain? Then discovered Country #172, ruled that, and created The Army to take over the rest of the world.

• The Army- Still exists today, just different people. The Army is men from the ages of 18-30. They serve for 5 years, or until they die via training or battle.

Characters

• Rose Amers- main character- Looks:

Dark brown glossy straight thin hair. “Egyptian” style haircut (or

Country # 56) Bangs cut straight snd thick over her eyes, which are light ice blue. Pale- ish (from State # 6, Massachusetts) 5'6”. Beautiful.

• Adam Rica- Looks:

Brown hair. Tousled. Smokey grey eyes (smoldering hehe.) ABS! Not too muscley though. Hotness.

• Rose's personality

BADASS! Sarcastic, kickass, swear-y, ridiculously smart.

• Adam's Personality:

Sweet, shy, Rose's balance (that's why they're friends!) protective, cautious, smart.

• The Emperor's personality:

Cold, cruel. It runs in the family.

Author's Note

thoughts? And this is serioudly what I write down in my notebook... :P

Reviews

[jennifer little]

good job nice work

[MandaBear]

I would read it!Sounds really Good!

[Chelsea]

I would read it!

[Archia]

Well I think it sounds quite interesting. It doesn't really say much of what actually happens, but still it sounds interesting. I'm intruiged by how Rose and Adam will interact with each other. I think you should definately make this a book, or a story at least.

[M]

This seems more like character sketches and concept than a plot for a story. It's hard to evaluate the merit of an idea when you don't know what's going to happen or the reason for this apocalyptic setting. The characters do seem cute though. :)

[Forevermore]

i like the descriptions, u made a nice piece of something, i think u need a bigger or one more large event making the rest of the world the underdoggs n make them at the last minute come back and regain stability

[Abbie]

Sounds really Good! Totally start this as a book!!!

[Alex Vidmar]

Cant wait to read it in full keep me posted.

[Krystyna Herst]

Yeah do it!!!!! It sounds good :)

[Sylvana]

I like it. (: It's totally different, and tells the story of America... as not America... yeah.
You should start it. (: (but finish One of Eight, too ;D )