Unspoken (one)

Maybe somethings are better left unsaid

maybe somethings weren't meant to be brought into the world

secrets can remain unspoken

Souls can remain unbroken

You shouldn't have said that

broken the heart made of glass

you could have backed off

instead of destroying a tiny self esteem

that was already stacked up

compressed in secrets.

Unspoken,

lips sealed

is that so bad?

Must tears be shed,

for you to feel glad?

Truths can hurt

as much as lies,

maybe more,

so why

make a heart sore?

Author's Note

There's another poem of mine called Unspoken, tell me which one you like better?

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Sometime bad things need to stay hidden. Few people cab handle the truth. Poem open the door to question. I learn with a long life. Best to keep negative to yourself and allow pain to teach us to be wiser. I like the question at the end of this poem. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Lydia]

I like this one better than the second one, but both of them are amazing.

[JanieB]

Gosh, this poem is awesome! I am sure most of us feel like this often yet we don't say how we feel. Excellent work. Bravo!

[SuicidePact.]

wow this is wicked cool.

I loved the ending, those words spoek to me in a good way

LOVED IT

[The Surrealist inside ...]

" Truths can hurt
as much as lies,
maybe more,
so why
make a heart sore? "

Awesome lines ... Gracefully written ..