The Change

Just a crappy poem.

The winds of change are calling

New, changed leaves are falling,

Difference this wind will bring

but of what

does the wind sing?

As it blows

Some know

But others don;t realize

until it is right in front of their eyes

The Change

washes over me

flowing into my lungs

fixing all that is wrong.

Take a clear breath,

for the first time in a while.

The wind cleansed me

of all that was vile.

Author's Note

ugh, you reeally don't need to review this :P

Reviews

[Lina Grey]

So it's not your best. Its an intriguing idea, of the wind bringing change, and if you wanted I'm sure you could improve it. Like Abbie pointed out, it's don' t not don;t, that's the only grammatical error I found.
It is an ok poem, logicsal and direct. Thank you.

[Alex Vidmar]

This is pretty good. I like it.

[Abbie]

First off, this poem is not THAT bad. Sure, it's not your best and It doesn't look as if you spent forever trying to come up with it, but it is OK. Second, you made a mistake, Don't not Don;t. just a little something I noticed that you may or may not want to fix. :) Oh, and because you said you didn't need to review, I did, because... I just do that :P

~Abbie