Night sky happiness

She sat on her windowsill,

Looking up into the night sky,

The stars couldn't fathom why she looked so sad,

But as she stared and stared,

She was suddenly filled,

With happiness,

With laughter,

With joyfulness,

She was not alone,

Not alone with the stars.

Reviews

[SleepSpectrum]

This was by far my favorite poem I have read in awhile, and I am not just saying that. This was exactly what I needed right now! It was so well written and so simple yet magnificent. Sometimes I get just overwhelmed with happiness and such a craving for life that I can't describe, but you just did. I love stars in writing because they are seen by everyone yet different to everyone.

I loved this poem so much, and I hope I can see more like this in the future. You have a real talent!

[Luna]

Wow thankyou!

[Mila]

This was nice, short and powerful. I enjoyed it and read it a few times before writing this review. Well done! :)

[Luna]

Thankyou very much!