My Whole

broken, but she still loves.

Need closure.

Just wanna get together,

It'll make me feel better...

Oh my whole

You made me a broken soul,

But for you...

My heart is still whole.

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

Love it thanks for your entry

[rumi]

Thank you for your review (ur welcome) 😇

[John the Baptist]

Romantic love is an addiction.

[rumi]

I wholeheartedly agree

[Buddhistboy73]

Ah the knife of love that leaves us feeling cut once it leaves us...
For me this is short but emotional and leaves the reader feeling that the writer is still yearning for the lost love..

Thanks for sharing

BB73

[rumi]

Ah, your words hit like that very knife—sharp, sweet, and lingering. Love’s wounds never really close, do they? They just become part of our rhythm, like a heartbeat with a scar.
— A fellow wanderer in the aftermath of love’s weather 🌧️✨

[Serendipity Planet]

Good expression of your emotions, your poems are beautiful

[rumi]

Thank you so much, that means a lot to me