pretty perfect precission

u r perfect the way u r, dont change for the world. FOR he made u perfect for the world.

you are perfect!

You are pretty

You are precious.. and#

You were made to great precission.

WHO are you now?

WHAT has become of you?

WHERE is the precission in your works?

 

the PIERCINGS,

the TATOOS,

the ARTIFICIAL ENHANCEMENTS.

 

he MADE you the best.

he MADE you the beauty.

he MADE you the most precious of all.

 

Y change it for the WORLD?#

Y the breast enhancements?

Y the fake plastic bums?^

 

the ANSWER is simple.

the LACK of love for yourself

FALL in Love with youself...

and you won't even think of whatever

you are thinking of to do?

 

the DOOM is falling in Love with the

WORLD!

YOU will do anything

to be that person you are NOT

meant to be!!

Author's Note

to all you my beloved readers! am sorry if am being so open minded and if i hurt anyone in the due course! the fact is that we shouldnt change ourselves for we are beautiful, perfect , pretty and precious. those piercings, tatoos, and whatever just paint a whole lot different picture of who you are. but if they have a strong story behind them, then go for it these are just my views...

Reviews

[Danielle]

A well expressed meaning of being happy with the way you are, love yourself, respect yourself, be true to you. Very nice!

[Frieda P]

This is such a strong write, and points out the artificial flavor of our society and the need to be like everyone else, or what they perceive to be acceptance. Nicely written.

[luviva]

thank you.. for passing by....

[DrD]

I'm going to be honest . . . . tattoos, piercings, etc. are a complete turnoff with me and I look for internal beauty and the natural look unenhanced by even makeup. I do not oppose makeup, mind you, but when I wake up in the morning, I want to recognize the woman beside me. You captured all this very well and I agree with your opinions. Well done.

[luviva]

thank you soo much!! just wish people get the positives behind the peom and love themselves more without those enhancements. thanxx again for passing by and the review.

[Anonymous Girl]

That is so true actually!! I can't be asked to change myself for the world... Pfft... Crap all of those who think am ugly or dumb and not pretty... I don't actually give a damn about it...
Its truly written.. I like it Luviva ;)
AND it's so going in my favourites ^^
Keep writing like this ^^

[luviva]

yeh, you are right and tell you what gal, u r beautiful and perfect jut the way u r.

[Anonymous Girl]

Thanks ^^ So are you ^^

[scripted]

you blow my mind I LOVE THIS POEM it has so much meaning amazing

[luviva]

thank you!! :D

[Rose of Gondor]

Again, very honest and doesn't try to spare any one of anything! :D Everyone is unique and meant to be the person they are, but sometimes it's hard to stay true to yourself, because then it's basically you against the world. I love the capitalized words in the middle of this poem. Gives them a sense of importance!

[luviva]

thank you soo much, really appreciated it!!

[Rose of Gondor]

Thank YOU for posting such a wonderful poem!

[khalid]

i love it really...i have written one before with the same meaning about artificial beauty..but yours is so much more detailed...

[luviva]

thank you so much!!

[khalid]

welcome, my pleasure

[yusuf]

So true! This is so important to learn in life and you conveyed it beautifully. I liked the design too.

[luviva]

most appreciated!! thanks for passing by

[Ahmad Cox]

There is a lot of strong truth in this poem

[luviva]

thank you Ahmed!!

[David Scott]

Well,... I get what you are after here. We should love ourselves as we exist. Yet we all "change" to accommodate. It is easy to pick out tatts and b***s and fashion. I think that those who pick out one culture and call it compromise do not realize that their own culture may not be what was the most healthy and natural path for human society...
Not put off at all by the poem, but I do think it ignores the more insidious compromises of our individuality. Like conforming to arbitrary ideologies of religion or cultures.
Be well my friend. Enjoyed the write.

[luviva]

your reviews are really constructive and they make me thik twice. but i actually accomodated for the individuality of people in this poem... if you read the last line of my authors note. i realise that these tatoos or piecings or whatever, sometimes tell stories about peoples lives and they have a significancy in their lives. but its to those who do it for the sake of doing it, because my friend has one, or because the picture looks nice, or bigger breasts are better than small ones ....and so on.