Happen

well... yeh!

Happened to follow all that

Happening around me.

Hyper inflation and all the

High rising tension couple with

Hasher commands and decisions imposed by the

High ranking personnel.

 

Advances in technology

Allowing then to over see

All the country's on goings

Accessing all they can

As they wish, thinking they can.

 

Privacy it was in the first

Place... but what it now?

Piracy?

practically it is...

 

Piracy, I can't now trust the

protector, how will they do it when

People in charge of our online safety

 

Entrusting our online lives to them but

Ending in betrayal as our online lives are..

 

Naked!! because they are watching us...

 

 

 

 

 

Author's Note

review... this is about the Snowden case
are we really safe?? do we have the privacy the internet browsers promise?

Reviews

[Frieda P]

Lots of food for thought in this one, I for one always feel a bit exposed online, an interesting take on an acrostic here, very clever...well done luviva.

[luviva]

THANXX frieda.. always appreciate you stopping by.

[Frieda P]

My pleasure luviva, enjoyed.

[SHEEMA HUQ]

You have a lucrative set of ideas and words which I was relating to high ranking corruption of some sort, a real thought provoker

Just a few errors noted;
Perhaps you mean, you, "Happened to follow, all that was happening around me" ....

Also, you need to amend, 'Harsher' from 'Hasher' - which is not a word.

I hope that this is helpful.

[luviva]

thanxx...for de tym n 4 de correction

[Siren]

safety is a powerful illusion... we chase after it, and go to terrible lengths to ensure it. but the best safety isn't in perfect government or low crime rates. i think it lies in knowing that whatever else is going on, we are loved. it's the biggest risk, but....i believe it creates a firmer foundation than putting trust in a man-made system ever could.

[luviva]

proper ryt# thanxx for the tym

[Siren]

welcome :)

[Balkaran Sidhu]

this was a interseting topic that u chose...well penned...feeling like we're being watched over :p :D

[luviva]

thank you so muchh:)

[Paul Seaman]

we have no more privacy on the internet using the standard tools than a goldfish in a tank on the dining room table... same with our phones... There are tools that can mask our web activity, but there are forces at work leading the opportunity for a truly private and self-determined life to slaughter. We must balance fighting with hiding and choose our fights well. In the end, the hero's usually are marytered in real life, so one must decide what is most important, liberty or...

[luviva]

you are right and couldn't say that you are wrong/..
just look at Snowden i mean..wasn't he the hero but he is now a hunted man!

[Paul Seaman]

indeed...what did he know, and conversely what now do our enemies know...

[Kyle Sky]

You can induce a sense of paranoia to the reader with this poem. Great job at that. Also, it really is true to ask "do we really have privacy" . Well done piece.

[luviva]

thanxx Kyle appreciate you dropping by

[StayAnchored]

That's kind of a creepy poem to think about because it so true... Great job :)

[luviva]

thanxx j, always can count on you

[StayAnchored]

You're welcome! Right back at ya :)