just a traveler.

its all about the journey.

Just a traveler

Passing through this foreign land

Tripping over the unfamiliar terrain

But got to keep going

After every stumble and fall,

I get up with my head held higher than before

Because I know the view just gets better with every step.

I have to see the journey through.

Author's Note

I have been away for almost a year, I have missed you all and Hope you all been good.
I am back and hopefully back to stay.
Please read, review, criticize, as thats how we all grow.

Your's joan

Reviews

[alanwgraham]

Very good Luviva. I'm not sure it is all about the journey. Poetry can take us into places that ordinary writing can't. It could be about the virus or many other areas.
Cheers,
Alan

[Perkele.7885]

Nice to meet you joan
I am curious about the first 5 lines, no subject or predicate, by design? implied?
I liked the poem anyway!

[luviva]

nice to meet you too perkele.
for your curiosity, sorry I cant provide a definite answer as I just wrote that on my train journey back home. It was random and I don't think they do have a subject but as poetry is, it just scratches your mind and gets you thinking. so you can make of it whatever you want. When I read it before deciding to post it, it got me thinking about life how we all just gotta dust off and move on.. I Don't know what it made you think.. but thank you for the review.

[Perkele.7885]

I am ex-cop. we tend to ask a lot of questions. just the facts Mam! I just notice things that the average yahoo would not notice.

[luviva]

Uhmm ex-cop guess I might wanna rethink all that I want to say.. But hey its poetry. U got to be unapologetic