Moonstruck�

Moonstruck

Aesthetically pleasing in every way,
your personality lights up a room.
From a mile away, I feel your glow.
And even in my sleep, I see your perfect face.
Kisses like morphine,
and hands like feathers,
I'm lost in a stupor before you can breath the three words
I've wanted to hear for so long.
Your simple gestures weaken my knees,
and your blue eyes drown me.
How was I so lucky as to find you?

© 2009 Tiff-AH!-knee�

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Scarlet Pulse

Love the line "kisses like morphine". There's a song that says "lips like morphine". Great figurative language used too.

Posted 16 Years Ago

f**k you

This was really adorable. :] GREAT flow and good imagery. Keep it up!

Posted 16 Years Ago

Theresa

Very well written and it flows wonderfully. It is really beautiful. I especially love the lines:
"Kisses like morphine,
and hands like feathers,"
I also really like the title. Nicely done. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 16 Years Ago

Tori	Cuuuute :) I love it! This is an excellently written love poem, and I'm a sucker for those. Posted 16 Years Ago Cuuuute :) I love it! This is an excellently written love poem, and I'm a sucker for those. Rating /100 1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

lizzy

Thats an awsome pome i lover how you worded it plez review some of mine i only have two

Posted 16 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on November 4, 2009
Last Updated on November 14, 2009

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Tiff-AH!-knee�

SWINEFLU,, ME

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My name is TIffany. I love to write. My favorite poets include Edgar Allan Poe, and Emily Dickinson. I'm not going to lie, I enjoy Shel Silverstein as well. :) I won my fourth grade poetry contest.. more..