Angeline

Might be too short--let me know if it feels unfinished.

 

I passed you by. Just quickly--

a sparing hug was exchanged,

a “you look good” muttered into

your shoulder. Me? I only

looked older. In walked-through

sneakers, a tee-shirt, I am

someone you can walk by and

not know and not care. But you

remembered, and I guess there’s

something there, in that.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

no unfinished at all..."less is more"
you leave us different ways to take this...
we are more important to others than we often give ourselves the credit...
and sometimes casual, comfortable...fits in but is more important than flash that is only on the outside.
j.