building patience

she cries out for me
forbidden love restricts my
future wife from me.

Reviews

[Marilyn My Bitterness]

You're amazing this is so sweet and so true. I love that you don't doubt it for a second, that you knew from the beginning that marriage was imminent. Patience is the hardest thing to have, especially when something so beautiful is waiting on the other end, just barely in reach. Love the way it was written. Keep writing.

-Marleina

[Tanya]

Awe, i really love this. It's so sweet, and expressed wonderfully in a haiku.
Good Job.