Mirror, Mirror (original haiku) by LyricalKing

A Poem by lyricalprince

this is the haiku my older bro written that gave me the idea for my poem Mirror,Mirror it really inspired me i hope you will feel the same way! p.s LyricalKing is the nickname I gave my brother

Mirror,Mirror

by LyricalKing

mirror on the wall

hanging there about to fall

your my only friend

© 2013 lyricalprince

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lyricalprince

thanks bro for the idea! PLZ REVIEW!

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I've always been fond of Haiku. Thought it deviates from the original Haiku format, this poem is beautiful in its simplicity and its meaning. I would just change "your" in the last line to "you're" for grammar. But other than that, I really like it.

Posted 12 Years Ago

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I've always been fond of Haiku. Thought it deviates from the original Haiku format, this poem is beautiful in its simplicity and its meaning. I would just change "your" in the last line to "you're" for grammar. But other than that, I really like it.

Posted 12 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on July 13, 2013
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