4:01 pm

i didn’t realize liking you 

was something to be ashamed of 

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

Dear Mabel Mae. I am waiting for you to post something new. Get that pen out girlie :))

Chris

[mae]

it’s been hard but i’m working on a longer poem!! -mabel :)

[mae]

I’M FINISHEDDDD! 3(maybe more?) poems have gone up!!

[Davidgeo]

Shame is a useful tool if you can handle it.

[Thomas W Case]

Powerful work. t could be taken several ways.

[Ken e Bujold]

a very sharp poem. From the Title, which the two scant lines leads you back to immediately, which then leads you back to the almost infinite number of questions posed by the entire piece. Sharp Sharp Sharp

[Ballpark Frank]

I connect with these words.

[Brad Dehler]

Hello
I like how you name the time of the poem. I assume it was when it was created. I typically time stamp when I write as well. Also, i find similarity in how you & i write. Thank you for sharing.

[Pete]

other people have a way of burdening us with their opinions which often don't matter and shouldn't.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this could be read a zillion ways.

and brings up the question to the reader...Why?

[Chris Shaw]

Wow, this two liner packs a punch. Leaves a fair bit to the imagination Mabel Mae. Creates different scenarios.

Chris