11:23 am - young

11:23 am - young

A Poem by mae
"

for will.

"
you wanted sex 
and money and
weed and fame
but i could
only give you
kisses and smiles
and hands and
life.

© 2025 mae


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I think what you could give is much better than what the subject wanted. Much better.
We can only be saved if we want to for ourselves no matter what others are offering.
j.

Posted 1 Year Ago


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Added on April 28, 2024
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hello, my name is mae. I have been writing poetry for about 3 years now and am constantly looking for new ways to improve. friending works two ways. if I review your poems, I expect you to do the s.. more..