5:39 pm

forever ended too soon

but we shall soon paint the sky

with my melted crayons

and your broken wings

Reviews

[Arundass TP]

I was first attracted to the title of the poem. I thought what happened at that time! Really catching. Secondly, nicely written poem. As if painted in s canvas. Beautiful ❤️❤️❤️

[Davidgeo]

What's his name again... the dude who flew the wrong way... not everyone understands what the wings are for I guess.

It always ends painful eventually anyway... right? you've done this before...

I love your glasses

[mae]

his name is Icarus. he is a beautiful figment in Greek mythology and a lot of poems are written about him. I actually wrote a poem about him as well, one of the first ones I posted on here if you want to check it out.

without the dark, how would we ever see the stars, you know?

thanks!! -mabel

[jacob erin-cilberto]

melted crayons and broken wings...very touching images.
j.