Andromeda

Andromeda

A Poem by Macciola
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Written 10/3/15

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She’s a galaxy

A garden of stars and I want to hold each one

She can shine so bright, but she burns out more often than not

She seems unattainable; she is always out of my reach

I can only point my telescope to the sky and wait for night

© 2017 Macciola


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All right this one is perfect. Beautiful poetic end , reader can wonder through your words . There is nice meaningful love desire. Poem have sad tone , but most of my writing too. Allegory of stars and humans always work great.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Macciola
Macciola

NY



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Hi! This is my writing blog for my favorite collected pieces. I usually write short poems or short stories, and I like to edit others’ writing. Please feel free to tell me what you think! more..