Tight-Rope Love

From the way you smile, to the way you look,

You capture me, unlike no other;

to my sharp inhaled breath, in which you took,

this feeling of affection is not easily passed to another.

 

Your calm yet piercing gaze, cuts deep into my soul,

Leaving my heart thumping with excitement and thrill;

Your honey sweet words have taken its toll,

On that fragile heart you chose to kill.

 

Yet you are absolutely intoxicating,

For you have begun to appear in my dreams;

I hope I wake from this eternal longing,

And pray that we will not tear at the seems.

Reviews

[Enchanted-Raven]

Beautifully done....enjoyed :) x

[kittyy]

thank you! :)

[Antonio Valentino]

i really enjoyed the staggered cadence in this it meshed well with my own off beat rhythm.

lovely sentiments as well.. very pleasantly surprised

keep at it..

[kittyy]

thank you so much! :)

[Antonio Valentino]

You are very welcome.. 😊