Camino del Diablo (Road of the Devil - Translated into English)

May or may not be all correct in Spanish....I tried...but my Spanish is rusty, so suggestions and corrections are REALLY welcome.

El calor de las llamas lame…
Los pies del viajero tropiezan.
Quien siembra vientos
recoge tempestados.

Evite este camino.
Camino del Diablo.

Este camino asesinará vida -
El infierno atormentará el alma.
Más vale precaver
que tener que lamentar.

Evite este camino.
Camino del Diablo.

 

Road Of The Devil

The heat of the flames licks -
The feet of the traveler trip.
If you sow wind,
You will reap a storm.

Avoid this road.
Road of the Devil.

Death torments life.
Hell torments the soul.
Better to prevent,
Than forever lament.

Avoid this road.
Road of the Devil.

Author's Note

Any suggestions are welcome. Any corrections are welcome. I am not a native and struggled a bit with the writing, and I am entirely unsure if all of the grammar or usages are correct, so please correct me if they are not.

Reviews

[Shellie]

Had to read this when i saw the title - theres a road by my house the R666 dubbed 'The Devils Road!'
As for your piece.... Girl this is a triumph. Its amazing. 'If you sow wind, you will reap a storm'. wow.