Fallen
A Poem by
Lieles
Sometimes you can't tell the liars and backstabbers.
There you stood,
Watching as I fell.
But you raised no brow,
you lend no hand.
I'm in pain,
can't you tell?
The vision of you
get smaller,
as I continue
to descend.
But your voice
still in my head.
The one I thought
was a friend.
© 2017 Lieles
Reviews
Oh! A similar betrayal as I describe in, 'Drowning'. Yes. Good read :) I.I.
Posted 8 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
So heart touching. I like the way you have narrated it.
Posted 8 Years Ago
So heart touching. I like the way you have narrated it.
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
8 Years Ago
Thank you, very much appreciated
8 Years Ago
My pleasure :)
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Added on February 10, 2017
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Lieles NY
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Strong love for words and the power they possess. I'm not a great writer but definitely working on it. So please share your thoughts and wisdom, it is much appreciated
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