Action

Liberating, exhilarating,

The adrenaline enters and seeps,

Blood pumps to the point of pain,

But so enticed am I, 

I can't sleep for the pounding.

What is taking over me?

Whatever it is, I surrender

I surrender to the lustful gaze,

The overwhelming slither

Of the intoxicating desire,

Life finally entered my body,

And now I will act...finally

Reviews

[Bishop_2002]

Nice poem, i really enjoyed it.

[Chris]

Heat and awakening... two very potent forces in a person's existence.

[Everett DeValle]

Gosh, I loved how your poem flowed, Manda...in life, when someone gets it, they get it...it just clicks speaking from life experience. Nicely done.