alice

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alice

i know everyones staring at me. with my tan body, brown hair with blond highlights, and dark blueish green eyes i look like a model. im wearing light short shorts and a green tank top which is low in the back. ive also made out with several guys. at school, though its a different story, people dont notice me because im not in the "cool group." right now im eating frozen yogurt and all the guys love it. wait is that jake? jake is the most popular guy in school. he walks right up to me and we make small talk. then before i know it........

Reviews

[forevermore1218]

This could be a very good start to the novel. It was a bit confusing and went like a blurr. It was a bit hard to keep up with and went a little to fast. I think that you have a good start. I am looking forward to reading more :)

-forevermore1218

[Admiral Kirk]

Mm... Interesting start... Very short, however. Oh well, it's pretty well done. Sounds like it could be interesting. :)