happy journey!!!

feelings of someone towards a spl one..who has left for trip with her friends !!

This world seems to be a beautiful plan...
the light..the ..sun.. the swift swan..
a plan designed not by u or me...
but the plants ...the rainbows and the waving sea!!

oh!! i m tired inking about the irony in nature..
continuing this style .... may have a knockout future..
i sat down on Thursday thinking to write something funny..
then heard u left .... to enjoy the goa sunny!!

i was happy as u were excited..

a trip to goa with love insighted..
it gave me goosebumps thinking if it was u n me..
then hit myself with a stick of reality!!

i woke up from the hit of reality pain..
but decided to write down my lonely lane..
trying to hold on to your shadow in vain..
i dreamt this nightmare making me insane...!!

i slept but with no dream, oh dear..

i woke up with no sleep, my dear..
these pillows..the phones..nothing stood by, ah dear..
i was happy u were going ..very happy ..with your dear..!!

`it only seemed like u were hitting it with a dart..
i crushed the paper i wrote in the waste pot..
had to pen down everything in a lot!!

the rhyming shows how stupid i m..
the dream shows how insane i m...

the moisture in my eye shows how childish i m..

the sober shows....how ..... how,,, hurt i m..

wish i can say what u mean to me..
these words just disappear when i try to say..
then i look back at your hug..
then feel how alive i m.

the rhyming stopped but not the sense..
the sense u left me in the past tense.
i wish i was in your heart..fit into the fence.
i have no idea if you understood these expressions..!!!

just felt you were gone too far..
a little far that made me swear..
i swore i would never miss u..
then i miss you .....completely..

this is the worst i have written..
these words cant make anyone smitten..
its just may be like a torn shirt with no button..
but,,, open it is ... it says how,, this distance has made me disheartened!!!!!!!

 

Reviews

[Surya pradha]

what a bit of rhyming! thoroughly enjoyed your poem.

[mani]

Thank u :-)

[mani]

reviews can always improve me !!! feel free to review / criticize...