hide tears

Just few lines crossed my mind. When i got scolded by my father.

When you are tired of your life.
And wants your tears to be hide.
Go to bed and hold your pillow tight.
Sleep all night until your face,
Get a sweet smile.

Reviews

[Surya]

Haha, that's a therapy..Will try it..:)

[manisha]

thanks for your review. :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

Hiding tears is the bravest thing one can do while putting on a happy face. This is nicely written..

[manisha]

Thanks for ur time and review glad u liked it...:)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You are welcome ☺

[Happy hours]

that's what we do....very nice poem...thanks for sharing.. :)

[manisha]

Thanks u liked it

[samparks,sam]

When you are tired of your life.
And wants your tears to be hide.
Closed your eyes and reminded me
found me around you nicely
You are breavo of this life
Cant Acceft deficit of any kind
I will struggling for you
The life is the with you real life


Nice poem good I like it

[manisha]

Thanks for completing it. Although in tha piece first two line was mine and rest was suggested by friend. :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

needs to be smoothed out ---the theme is really good---but the reading is a bit awkward...this has such potential with some slight editing.

j.

[manisha]

Thanks for advice i will do that. :)

[Shabeeh Haider]

It hurts when you are remanded by the people that you love.
Sleeping off that hurt, helps a lot.

[William Liston]

I can certainly relate to the emotions expressed in this poem. Sometimes, all we have to do is sleep at night and wait for the next day for everything to be better. Thanks for sharing this piece. I truly enjoyed it.

-William Liston

[manisha]

Thanks you right every morning brings new hope.