Six Word Short Story 7-13

Six word short stories.

7. Both of us home, bedroom locked.

8. Interlaced in anxiety, Sally bid farewell.

9. Fresh tears, she died last month.

10. Abused at home, he's a bully.

11. An obese students awakes, pillows soaked.

12. A child unwraps bars of diabetes.

13. Prom day, no students show up.

Reviews

[jcfrancis]

I like #7 of all these best. With only 6 words to work with, I think the true challenge here is to create something that the reader must fill in all the unwritten words with whatever experience or imagination that they bring with them to the poem. That one seems to capture it perfectly, I think. The others are very good also, but #7 stands out for me...

[Salman Y.]

Prom day, something that used to be cool and looked forward to, now kids are to cool for it. :(

[Somewhere In Wonderland]

prom day? is that the day where camels and goats slow dance festively?

[Salman Y.]

only if there is queso