A Baby Smiling at a stranger

had to write something after reading the following message from one of my friend which goes like this: Somethings cannot be explained : A baby smiling at a stranger a bird singing in the winter

Like a baby smiling at a stranger
You hit me with wonder
why, how and why me
I sit and ponder

Like a bird singing in the winter
You brought back a bit of summer
when, where and why now
I think blinded, in the glimmer

how do you look
what is your voice
All I see is Sophie's choice

Will you be, forever mine?
The Heart that feels
The eyes that shine

An unexplainable occurrence
A terrifying disappearance
A question of time
a beautiful rhyme.

Author's Note

Fresh out of my Writers Block

Reviews

[Kieta!]

This flows so nicely and it fits together perfectly! So beautiful! Great job! :)

[Broken.buddy]

Thank you for the kind words

[Lucien Maier]

funny i really like the why, how and why me. I also really like you hit me with wonder....
Good flow and pull through out the piece nicely penned.

[Laura Ashley Lord]

This is absolutely beautiful, with heartbreaking imagery. This line, "why, how and why me" read a little wonky for me. The rest of the poem has such a good flow, but this one didn't fit that rhythm for me.

[Broken.buddy]

Noted that. Thank you very much

[Coyote Poetry]

Beautiful use of words create good description and vision. I like the use of the baby. A baby can light up a room with laughter and smile. No weakness in the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Broken.buddy]

Thank you very Much for the Kind words. You have been a real friend around here, even though i logged back in after almost 3 years now. :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Always good to read your work. Strong story and something to be learn.