Hidden

Caught in your orbit
by the same source we are lit
Sometimes
I hide where your shadow falls
And together we are an eclipse

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i love brevity, allows for those shadows to be interpreted and felt many ways...

i have been there and done this...there was love, yes...but together we were more a shadow than a sun or moon...

[M. Shepherd]

Thank you Jacob :)

[Andrew Sav Halen]

Very mysterious and short, right to the point and emotional. Great job.

[Willard Wells]

Only the shadow knows. Well done short verse.

[M. Shepherd]

Thank you!

[. serah .]

-- sometimes, i wonder if being consumed so completely is what we really want... or not at all... and i can't quite make up my mind... -- exquisite poetry...

[M. Shepherd]

I feel as an apprentice here, it feels safe in that shadow. But someday..

[. serah .]

-- hmmm... i sense what you mean...