Where have all the boys gone
A Book by Marc Marlon Villaflor
 Where have all the boys gone  © 2013 Marc Marlon Villaflor
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Hi guys thanks for the review, please bear with me. I'm still developing this story. :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
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12 Years Ago
where did the old picture go? :)
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12 Years Ago
I just change it because the character now aged 15-16 and the action chapter will come soon.
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12 Years Ago
Well, at least you put it back. :)
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Now where's the next part? XD
I've always been fascinated by war stories and movies (the personal narrative or action part). I suddenly remember Anne Frank, really...war is the worst! But it brought golden stories that we can cherish forever :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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12 Years Ago
I am working for this :) I am not very good in action short story but I will try. Thanks for the rev.. read moreI am working for this :) I am not very good in action short story but I will try. Thanks for the review.
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12 Years Ago
You did good already, just keep it up :)
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12 Years Ago
That was fast! It's good so far...I can't wait for the action part :)
I just have few n.. read moreThat was fast! It's good so far...I can't wait for the action part :)
I just have few nit-picks though :)
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12 Years Ago
lol that the hard things to write hehehe, just bear with me lol :)
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This is good so far. Will there be more? The young boy soldier part reminds me of that dumb t**d Hitler and how he sent boys off to fight his war. And again, will there be more? :D
Posted 12 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
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12 Years Ago
Yes Ana :) thanks for the review :) you are my inspiration that's why I am writing in this genre lol.. read moreYes Ana :) thanks for the review :) you are my inspiration that's why I am writing in this genre lol :)
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12 Years Ago
Aww. That means so much!! :) I didn't think anyone would be inspired by me xD
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12 Years Ago
I like your style in writing action stories :)
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12 Years Ago
Which inspired you? Where the Red Rose Withers or my Manuscript? Just curious :D
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12 Years Ago
Where The Red Rose Withers, I love this big time.
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12 Years Ago
:) thanks again for the review.
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Added on March 11, 2013
Last Updated on March 19, 2013
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Marc Marlon VillaflorDIFC Dubai International Financial Center, Dubai City, United Arab Emirates
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I am just writing for almost 2 months now and no background in the world of poetry. Hope you will always share your wisdom and correct my mistakes as I need it to solidify my dreams to write. Thank y.. more..
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