I don't like you

Love/HateThoughts

Not right now

Maybe later

when you aren't

shredding me 

with that serrated knife

And maybe 

you won't ever put down

that knife 

and I shall have to

kill you.

Author's Note

This is my second piece of poetry ever published. The first was in 1989.

Reviews

[Terra]

I love the specifity of the knife, like saying just a knife wouldn't be enough!

[Swirling Wildly]

Thanks for your review! Very helpful, especially as I start publishing my thoughts.