Always with me

I've been stressed,

But, God knows I've been blessed.

My troubles and struggles,

Bring me closer to my Savior.

I lost my way for awhile,

But, God led the way back to him.

He never left my side,

Even though I left his.

Sometimes it's hard,

But, God pulls me through. 

My cry's he hears,

And my tears he wipes away.

I fail him daily,

But, never has or will he fail me.

God, is my anchor in the sea,

And never will my chain be taken from me. 

Author's Note

This is for my Savior!

Reviews

[quixotic_rose]

Very faith oriented. I'm not huge on religion, but when someone feels it so strongly I find great respect for them. Sweet, like a nice little prayer. Nicely done

[Marissa]

Thank you! (:

[Aehr]

Very well written. Its like a holy prayer, I think. I agree, God is always with us, by our side, helping us, and protecting us from harm. :D

[Marissa]

Thank you!

[Aehr]

no problem :)

[Barbara Walker]

Great analogy. Sweet, like a prayer!

[Marissa]

thank you!

[Leslie Philibert]

Well written poem from a convined Christian with a clear voice.

[Marissa]

thank you!

[Mark]

Very nice, faith is very important. Sixth stanza, cry's should be cries. Also, when using a word referring to God, He, Him... etc. it's customary to capitalize it.

Very thoughtful write, and well done!

[Marissa]

Thank you! I'll definitely go through and fix those things tomorrow...glad you like it and I appreciate the helpful tips and kind words. (:

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and positive poem for the faith in God. We need to believe in something or what is left for us?
"I fail him daily,
But, never has or will he fail me."
The above words are true. Forgiveness and love is the key to a good life. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Marissa]

Your welcome and thank you for the great reviews I love them it makes me feel good about my writing(: