Slow Fade

it's a free verse

Your laugh,

Your voice,

Your cry,

Will never fade away.

 

Im scared I'll forget...

How much you meant to me.

 

I miss you,

With my heart, soul, and mind.

 

The pain is slowly fading,

So please don't go with it.

 

You're trying too hard,

And I can feel you slipping away.

 

 

Reviews

[MOON]

Good write.

[Marissa]

thank you!

[Leslie Philibert]

Dr Wood spotted it - a great line !

[Marissa]

thank you! Glad you like it to haha

[Dr. Wood ?]

The pain is slowly slipping away so please do not go with it...great line!!!...This one I like

[Marissa]

YAY! Glad you like it :D

[Harley (arbiter)]

I love it and can relate! This reminds me of "hold on loosely" by .38 special. Great song. Great poem!

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

lovely title and last line!

[Marissa]

thank you!

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goes Cascading!)]

you're welcome!

[mariah]

i like it, but i feel like it needs one more stanza, just to tie it all together. other then that though, great work!
-Mariah

[Marissa]

thank you! And I'm trying to add more, but unfortunately I'm kinda stuck so right now I'm just going to leave it like this....thanks

[mariah]

yeah no problem!

[Emrys Realmskip]

Very well written, i like it! Its short but that ok:)
Savvy

[Legolas]

So well written. Reminds me of long distance relationships and how theyre really hard

[Chantel]

Very sad. :( I know the feeling of not wanting to let someone fade from your memory. That was probably my favorite part,

"I'm scared I'll forget...
How much you meant to me."

I also liked these lines:

"You're trying to hard,
And I can feel you slipping away."

Good piece. So sad.

[Revery]

This is a very heart wrenching bittersweet piece. Memories are so precious. Excellent write