PATRIOTIC BLUES

Really, nothing whatever to do with Patriotism...But it got your attention, didn't it??

 

Red sky at Mornin’ is a warnin’ I’ve heard

White clouds in the distance may soon bring the rain

Blue sense of foreboding, from a single small word,

Her Patriot Ms.’l’s aimed at me again

 

Red screaming, arms waving, the signs are all there

White lips pressed together, when all has been said

She done blew my mind, and I can’t seem to care

Cos her Patriot Ms.’l’s sighted in on my head.

 

I guess I missed the red warnin’ signs�"

Why?’t doesn’t matter a heckuva lot

It’s an ill wind that blew up a storm one more time

And now buckets of raindrops are all that we’ve got!

 

Well, I guess you’ve all read how many quarrels end,

As lovers try and make up, most de-mon-stra-bly

The fire from our lips has now sunk to our hips,

And MY Patriot missile’s parked right where it should be!

mark teague

september 29, 2011

Reviews

[Ladysue]

ha..great humor can through on this and it makes for great writing...

[emmajoy]

Laughing at what's undoubtedly true .. strange how these things are seen from up close .. your sense of humour makes quarrels almost fun .. well, something to write about, for sure! As to the writing, you certainly know how to do it, Mark, always have, always will.

The fire from our lips has now sunk to our hips,
And MY Patriot missile’s parked right where it should be!

[LinBin]

great write x

[An owl on the moon]

You do have such a way with words, my friend! You've communicated about the battles fought behind closed doors and filled it with all the colors of the flag... each a representation of all that we must account for.. and sometimes fight for. Brilliantly expressed.

[Allen Smuckler]

Ahh...chalk up one more for that ole' Patriot Missle...and that unmistakeable makeup sex...one more battle for Old Glory...even while staring down those Patriot Ms. '1's
Funny!!
You put a smile on my face, Mark and a check in my deck...as you always do.
allen

[Muse]

What a lustful patriotic write! Are you drunk? lol
Why?’t doesn’t matter a heckuva lot
She ain't from the South?? lol