Injustice

haiku

 

you paint injustice

like a Crayola sunset�"

but my love isn’t child’s play

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

Short but sooo powerful...Thank you for sharing...:)..............

[Mark Heathcote]

Thanks for the comment mate it's very much appreciated. ;-)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)...............

[Lydia Shutter]

Wow, this one packs a punch and the photo you chose to accompany your words is stunning. I hope the one for whom it is intended reads this. Lydi**

[Mark Heathcote]

I liked it though I’d question the third line starting with – but - simply because it doesn’t allow a clean break from the first two lines? Thanks for this review Lydi :)

[Lydia Shutter]

You could eliminate it, but it would throw off the syllable count. I don't do the forms...really can't help you there. Lydi*