the winner is..

surrounded by so much potential

 

we threw jabs at inconsistency instead

 

12 rounds of nonsense proceeded...

Reviews

[rjrodriguez]

boxing?

[Ashentara]

I like short pieces like that
makes you think, makes you wonder, makes you try to put yourself in the writer's shoes, then you realize that the meaning is there for you to grasp at if you only take the time to make it yours.. if that makes sense :)

[The Spaniard]

short sweet powerful. lets the imagination run wild. well done

[Nicole (Carpe Diem)]

making the reading draw his or her own thoughts and conclusions from this piece is part of the charm i think... great piece -

[Natalie C]

draw his or her own conclusions?
Hell this one could have been one great mystery, like life.
12 rounds?
Hmm I can think of a couple of things.
Thanks for sharing, I am most probably going to be pondering about this one for a while now.
That is why I liked it so much

[Adam Greenfield]

"She" always wins. That's one thing I've learned over time. And most of the time I'm ok with that.

I love this write. I like how short and powerful it is. It sets up a scene very creatively and leaves just enough for the reader to draw his or her own conclusions.

Great piece.

[Kat Williams]

Now this I'm feeling..killer in its simplicity. 12 rounds, 12 yrs, 12 months, 12 days...text argument lasting 12hrs.