A.P.

My first self descriptive poem. My birthday is here and all I see is my willingness to continue pushing forward. Its time to show off. lol

 

 

A.P.

 

A willing Heart

A tattered soul

A pride that has yet to be torn

 

A spoken word

A written truth

A mind that refuses to be burned

 

A warming smile

A loving touch

A wonder and amazement in your sight

 

A woman by day

A freak by night

This determined silhouette continues to fight

 

 

A.P.

What lies within maybe more

Then you can

handle

 

Author's Note

I can truly say that I dont care how anyone feels about this one. lol This was just for me but if you like it ....then I guess thats cool.

Reviews

[ba_mcfarlane]

My all time poetic icon is Nikki Giovanni. She had the brilliance it takes to keep it simple, let the emotion carry the day uncluttered by flowery detours. I'm betting you have taken inspiration from her style. I have. If not, run don't walk to the Google machine and soak her up. Looks to me like you have already. If you learn from the best you have a shot at being the best you can be.
Bravo.

[Jaded rose]

Definitely like...You go girl!!!!! I feel you.

[Kenny L. Mitchell]

Then I guess it's really cool then. I like it very much Lady V. You have style, wit, class and talent. You have the skills to really make it. Shine on dazzling sister!

[THE LOST ROSE]

Spoken like a tru artist. Thanks for doing a poem just for you! Well I love it. If you want to do another poem just for or you have some posted that are just for you then read request me Ms. Lady but I want to feel the fire and heat from them just like I did for this one. Thanks for sharing.

[Brianna Brie]

Cute...it has sass. I assume that A.P. is someone's initials. I like the concept.-

[Sean Allen]

Yeah, it's cool.